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Aah, I found it …

October 6, 2008 · 2 Comments

There is a ’sales copy editor’ that I found in BeBiz, so here is a ’sneak preview’ of my sales letter … keep in mind that this is the first time that I have seen the whole thing, too, so no doubt I will end up editing it a bit … or a lot

[BTW: I had to cut/paste into Word to get the document to show up here ... so, it has lost of its 'gee wizz' yellow highlighting and formatting ... oh well, you'll get to see the final version soon enough ... and, it seems that you also gain by seeing some of the comments that BeBiz has to help]

Learn the secret millionaire-making system that this genuine multi-millionaire used to get rich himself in just 7 years to make $7,000,000 cash in the bank! [Ouch! This definitely needs some changing ]

… Find Out How A Corporate Drop Out… With No Investing Experience … Went From $30,000 In Debt To More Than $7 Million In The Bank In Just 7 Years!

From the desk of Adrian J Cartwood
September 28, 2008

Dear Friend,

My name is Adrian J Cartwood, and I’ve got ONE question to ask that could change your life forever…

Do YOU have enough money to live the life you’ve always dreamed of?

Too many of us settle for a life that’s “good enough.” You commute to a stuffy office… work overtime trying to impress a boss who doesn’t care… and if you’re lucky, you get to squeeze in a few hours with your family on the weekend.

You cut corners trying to pay your loans, your mortgage, and all those credit cards and then you scrimp and save the little that’s left, hoping to make what? Enough to retire on at less than your current wage when you’re 65?

Is that the kind of life you want until you’re 65? Me neither!

That’s why you’ll be very excited to hear about the incredible information that I’m about to share with you…

I am the genuine article, a real, self-made multi-millionaire. Unlike many others who merely claim to be rich, I didn’t make my money by following any ‘get rich’ schemes and I won’t teach you any either!

I made my money the old-fashioned way: by investing in small businesses, in real estate, in stocks. Heck, in every way that you want to get rich, too!

For example, since becoming a real estate investor and learning profitable ways to make money off real estate, I have acquired several million dollars $$ worth of property in my real estate portfolio.

Likewise, I have learned to ride the waves of the stock market, putting millions of my own money at risk to learn the hard lessons that need to be learned in order to succeed whether the market is up or down.

And, I know what it takes to start, run, and sell a small business (again, for millions) having had more than 5 successful businesses in 3 different countries, employing more tha 100 people … all at the same time!

Online or offline … if it’s to do with business, real-estate, or investing I have ‘been there, done that’ and made a fortune – in ways that I am about to share with you.

You don’t need to travel the world to learn all of these lessons … I have done that for you and packaged my accumulated knowledge in this website, just for you!

Yes. Having the desire to do what most are not willing to do is an absolute giant step you are taking for your own financial freedom. And, learning how to make money in any – or all – of these good ol’fashioned ways that I am about to share with you is the way it all begins for you!

By investing your time reading the words I’ve laid out here – and in the material that I am about to give you exclusive access to – is a testament to your commitment to not being average and ordinary and wanting to do something special in your life.

I can relate to where you are right now and how you feel because it was only a few short years ago that I was $30,000 in debt (that’s right, $30k!) and desperately searching for my answers.

I was relentless in my pursuit of finding a ’scam-free’ way to become rich because I had tried so many things that just didn’t work out the way I had hoped for.

Like me … you’ve probably asked yourself:

* Where do I start?
* How does real estate investing work?
* How do I find or start a small business?
* Can I safely make real money in the stock market
* Is spending the time to learn all of this really going to pay off?
* Which books and programs do I study?
* How do I know how much I really need?

“The Information Is Invaluable”
I have been reading and re-reading the material on your site. I think the information is invaluable.
Luis, CA
“I Read It 5 Times!”
I love it AJC, I read it 5 times last night!
Monk, NY
“Can’t Wait To Read The eBook!”
This is what I’ve been looking for, like Kiyosaki will say there’s two kind of problems, having no money and having money – I happen to have the second one, can’t wait to read the ebook!
Benjamin, OH
“I wish I had stumbled across your website earlier”
I wish I had stumbled across your website earlier … I think I have a fairly solid financial intelligence, although I am always on the lookout for learning new information on stocks, and real estate and the like. Do you think its possible to do something like 2 million in 4 years, so that when I graduate I will have enough money to use to make more money with? And if so, how do I start that now?
Alex, IL
“Very Insightful”
I do have lofty goals and I believe I can make them happen but “financially getting there” seems to be a big stumbling block. So, I really enjoyed reading your articles, they were very insightful.
Lisa, CA

Back in 1998, I was I was $30k in debt and living off $50k a year working 60-hour weeks in a business that was failing, sucking down coffee all day just to stay awake because I was so exhausted and sick of working and getting nowhere.

I was what you would call “broke … with prospects”.

And then it occurred to me: even though I had no money, I would one day get some …. even though I had no idea at that time how.

And, I suddenly realized …
My life wasn’t about money … but, my money would one day be there to support my life.

You have NO idea how important that was to suddenly understand … and, how scary it was when I then discovered how to properly cost a life that, until then, I could only dream of one day living.

You see, I realized that for the life that I wanted … actually, needed … I had to be rich!
And, after a lot of trial and error, I discovered a ‘fool proof’ way to calculate how rich I needed to be:

To live the life that I had always dreamed of, I needed … $5 million … and, all I needed to do next was work out how to get there, because I was still $30,000 in debt!

So, believe me when I say that I’ve been in the EXACT same spot you’re in right now…

I remember the stress of bills… of financial uncertainty… of squeezing my eyes shut and praying that no more “unforeseen circumstances” would come my way and demand another big chunk of the money that I didn’t have.

But it’s not like that for me anymore. And, soon, it won’t be like that anymore for you, either …

I did something about it … and, I’m about to show you you exactly how to do the same!

You see, I must have spent $20,000 buying every book and attending every financial seminar that came to town without finding what I was looking for … but, I tried everything that the authors and presenters recommended. As you would expect, most of their flaky ideas failed (naturally, I lost even more money) but some ideas actually worked and pretty soon I was making money.

And, I evolved all of those ideas – together with my hard-won successes and miserable failures – into a system that began to make me money …

… and, it began to pick up steam, quickly erasing all of my previous losses and delivering spectacular gains.

I soon realized that I had developed a ‘fool proof’ lifetime financial strategy that would weather all markets – up and down – and all investments, safely steering me to the good and away from the bad.

The results speak for themselves: I went from $30,000 in debt to over $7 million cash in the bank, in just 7 years.

And, I determined that if I could do it, why shouldn’t others learn from my mistakes? Why should they pay $20,000 when they can have these ideas for next to nothing.

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Simple.

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Who said that you can’t make money and help others at the same time? This holds true for me, and I hope it will hold true for you, too. There is power in paying things forward, that’s why I am offering this jam-packed Special Report at such a ridiculously low introductory price …

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Diane // October 12, 2008 at 10:52 pm | Reply

Adrian – lots of good work went into this! There’s a lot of funky stuff tho at the end, like it duplicated and dropped all the hyperlink/html codes all over the place.

Given today’s market and – more importantly perhaps – MOOD, I would recommend flipping your letter. Right now it reads like a really hard sales pitch about to sail into the trashcan or suffer under a delete button. What a pity!

What is it that the reader needs to know first about this? That you’ve been there (where (s)he is now) and done this (got out, got rich, and – very important – can weather this storm we’re in now, regardless of whether or not you have $7M – that if you were $30k in debt NOW, you could figure this out).

Another scheme I’d change – drop the $.99 on the pricing – it’s designed to make it look cheaper, but it’s a tactic we all see, too, and I imagine you are going for the smarter folks out there who will see the gimmick more than the $.01 savings. Also, the additional thing you’re throwing in is “valued at $1.99″ – which is perhaps not quite what you mean (it’s only worth $1.99, but you’re throwing it in free? – it is not worth much then)….I think you know what I mean. It just came out wrong using the formula.

I would say the value is not $49 or $149 or whatever you threw out there, but you could use those as benchmarks such as “compared to other seminars costs of $49 or $149 or even $599″ – the value is in what you do with it, not what you pay for it.

Another thing that I suggest should be addressed with today’s mood – how do we know you are not just getting rich by making $3 each time some gullible investor clicks “download” and you don’t really have any money or know anything that the reader hasn’t already heard in one form or another? How is it market-proof?

As the 4hww book seemed to say (to me), one can set themselves up as an expert fairly easily (I’m sure there are a lot of pro-football players I would not recognize in public, which does not say anything about me or them, who are easily experts in what they do). What this means is that a lot of experts are out there, so how do we know that you are really an expert and not a self-proclaimed expert in this? What proofs do you offer?

I think the biggest proof you offer – and which is free – is your blog. One can read what you say and compare it to other financial blogs and see how one feels about it. That means the book will have to offer more than the blog does – perhaps covering in-depth perhaps some things which would be boring in a blog presentation – some how-to’s and some “common pitfalls,” and some not-so-common pitfalls perhaps, plus some anecdotes.

Think of this, AJC: What makes you want to read a book (after you’ve bought it)? This may give a key as to what your target audience is looking for today (not last week).

As always, hoping to trigger some thoughts that help you in your endeavors….
AJC // October 13, 2008 at 11:37 am | Reply

@ Diane – Thanks for your comments/advice. I’ll eventually take another look at the sales letter, but I’m working on the theory that most people won’t buy no matter what it says … the ’sales letter’ is generally seen as a ’scam’ except by an extremely targeted audience …

Now, I have a plan for that … but, you’ll have to waut and see. Firstly, I might buy some PPC to ‘prove’ to anybody who reads this that it won’t work (on it’s own).

BTW: Using my blogs to direct traffic (and, provide credibility) is one way, except for the following:

1. Using a blog to overtly market yourself would lose credibility – and, be a bad thing – for the blog.

2. Even if it didn’t, I operate under some additional ethical contraints around my blogs (I don’t allow advertising or product sales) that would preclude me from doing this, anyway.

Fortunately, I have a ’solution’ in mind, that I will share in due course …

I'm about to find out if you can make money online!

Aah, I found it …

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