… and, I already have a reasonably well-written ’sales letter’ for my e-books.
This is where I was hoping that BeBiz would shine, and I think it has delivered.
Built into the site is a nice ‘wizard’ for developing your own sales letter (you know the kind: just google “rich” and “jerk” if you want to see an example) … it walks you though all of the sections, with examples that you can use and/or modify as you see fit:
1. Headline
Example: Uncover the Breakthrough Secret that Insiders are Using to earn $10,000… $20,000… even $50,000+ Online in Just a Few Hours a Week…
2. Subheadline
Example: … See Results In As Little As 7 Days… Without Drugs, Supplements, Or Even Special Equipment!
3. Salutation
Example: From the desk of John Smith
Example: Dear Friend,
4. Problem
Example: If you’ve tried one diet, you’ve tried them all, right? Almost everyone I meet says they’re sick of getting their expectations up and then not seeing the advertised results. If you’re serious about building a better you, then listen to this exciting news…
5. Credibility
Example: My name is Stuart Strongvoice, and I’ve been teaching Hollywood celebrities how to speak, sing, and carry themselves like stars for over 20 years… and my tips can help you too!
6. Testimonials
Example:
Current Testimonials
| Headline | From | Content | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|
| “The Information Is Invaluable” | Luis, CA | I have been reading and re-reading the material on your site. I think the information is invaluable. | ||
| “I Read It 5 Times!” | Monk, NY | I love it AJC, I read it 5 times last night! | ||
| “Can’t Wait To Read The eBook!” | Benjamin, OH | This is what I’ve been looking for, like Kiyosaki will say there’s two kind of proble… | ||
| “I wish I had stumbled across your website earlier” | Alex, IL | I wish I had stumbled across your website earlier … I think I have a fairly solid financial int… | ||
| “Very Insightful” | Lisa, CA | I do have lofty goals and I believe I can make them happen but “financially getting there&r… |
7. Tell a Story
Example: I was standing on the deck of a rusty freighter, strumming my guitar, when I suddenly realized what I’d been doing wrong!
8. Identify with the Reader
Example: I, like many of you, spent years pinching pennies and cutting coupons without getting ahead… until I uncovered the secret of financial gain!
9. Overview of Solution
Example: What you’ll get is a step-by-step guide to making sure your pet never does its business on the carpet again — plus dozens of helpful tips for all different pet personalities!
10. Benefits
Example:
But that’s not all…
… Because this Internet profit resource ALSO answers your every question, doubt, concern, or need about the right way to get started online.
Not only will you discover everything you need to know about getting online and making money as quickly and easily as possible, you’ll learn how to…
- Identify and find the hottest products to sell.
- Profit from what you ALREADY know — hobbies, offline businesses, industry expertise, and more! You’ll be amazed, shocked, and astounded at how easy it is to find and pass on important information that others want to know about!
- Avoid the #1 mistake made by 90% of Internet start-ups so you can maximize the success of absolutely ANY online business you start!
- Discover how ANYONE can use FREE and low-cost research tools to find “hungry” markets (often in less than 20 minutes)!
- etc.
- etc.
…. And you’ll also learn the #1 most profitable thing you can sell online!
11. Close
Example: When you think about it, it’ll cost you less than a cup of coffee a day… and it could change your life just like it did mine!
12. Guarantee [BeBiz comes with a variety of 'guarantee images' to choose from]
Example: Take one full year to examine and use this home remodeling course. That’s right. You have 365 days to put this valuable course to work in your own home. Or on any project you want, wherever you want. Once you’ve used these strategies in your own home, I’m confident you’ll NEVER want to send it back!
13. Ask for the Order
Example: Just click HERE to order NOW — risk-free!
14. Signature
Example: To your success, John Smith
15. PS
Example: P.S. Imagine having your parents or brother or sister visit your new, bigger home — taking them into the den… walking them over to the computer on the corner table… clicking on to your first web site and saying, “Here’s one of my businesses. It paid for this house.”
… there you have it: the 15 key sections that make up a sales letter. Now you don’t need BeBiz to help you write one of these … but it certainly seems to help (and, I know how to write sales letters already).
Unfortunately, there doesn’t seem to be a ‘preview’ section that lets me see the whole letter (yet) … I first need to build the web-site …
… let’s see how good BeBiz is at helping me do that!

